Back when dinosaurs roamed the planet, I worked as a graphic
designer and shared a room in a graphics studio with Nancy Massa for about twenty years. Nancy’s
nickname was Half-Point, because she would send copy back to the typesetters
and ask them to reduce the spacing by a half point—that’s like a hair’s
difference. She's a meticulous designer.
So, of course, Nancy was the person I wanted to help me when I was working on my book's cover. We spent hours together nudging the elements
(title, post-it notes, chalk, chalk crumbs, bullet, etc.) into position.
I remember how Nancy used to squint at paragraphs of type. It should look consistently gray—never blobby or bumpy with
some letters looking thinner or thicker than the rest. The way black type colors up on a white page matters.
A couple weeks ago, my novel came back from the copyeditor. She fixed my misuse of commas, found misplaced words, removed the
extra “L” that I consistently added to the word cancelled, oops, I mean canceled.
One L is common in American English, while two L’s is common in Britain,
Canada, and Australia. She broke up my run-on sentences. She corrected my
tenses, “been there, done that,” “is there, doin’ that,” “will be there, and do
that.” I’m getting tense just thinking about it.
She also changed “okay” to “OK”.
I went through the
manuscript and made the corrections she suggested, but the “OK’s” haunted me. “OK”
seemed too loud, the capital letters almost acted like bold type. OK jumped out of the paragraph and
yelled at me. Whereas, “okay” with it’s lowercase letters, was quiet, more
passive and colored up better on the page. It merged with the other words and didn't draw special attention to itself.
The word “okay” is easy, calm, not excited. Well,
unless you’re in a pissed-off mood, and someone’s bugging you to do something
that you don’t want to, and you have to yell, “Okay, already!”
In many publications, okay is not OK. Only a third of publications use “okay.”
- The Wall Street Journal and The Chicago Manual of Style, 16th edition uses OK.
- The New York Times uses O.K.
- Reuters uses okay.
Well, too bad. I don’t like the way "OK" colors up on the
page. Nancy would agree. "OK" is just too loud. So I went back through the
manuscript and typed “ok” into the search box in Microsoft Word. I changed all the "OK’s" back to "okay" (consistency
is important).
There are creative liberties to consider here. In her
wonderful novel, The Orchardist,
Amanda Coplin wrote the dialog without quote marks. It added a sense of quiet
to the pages.
My novel has people who talk with quote marks around their
words, maybe not as creative as Coplin, but that's okay.